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- I enjoy your humour and am loving the limericks!
on Oct 26 2015 04:17 PM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - Thanks so much for checking it out...
on Oct 26 2015 04:27 PM PST x edit
Geneva H - Enjoyed it
Very cute, witty!
on Aug 22 2015 06:37 PM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - Hahaha, thanks G...
on Aug 22 2015 08:21 PM PST x edit
Dod - Your Limerick is fun. However you have gone for wandering three unaccented syllables which are not in the tradition on Limerick and don't work well for me. That can be fixed and retain all the good of your Limerick. 'Trekked to' to 'of'; 'proceeded' to 'started' and drop 'sure'. Then all the rhythms in lines 1,2 and 5 are the same and lines 3 and 4 com into their own full glory. I think you have a nice laugh maker there.
on Aug 22 2015 11:01 AM PST x edit
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Iff Ur Abs - Thanks for the honorable mate...much appreciate it...
on Aug 22 2015 11:12 AM PST x edit
Dod - You are very welcome
on Aug 22 2015 12:14 PM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - Cool...thanks for the tips...let me check it out...thanks...
on Aug 22 2015 11:06 AM PST x edit
Inkognito - somehow, I also want to go to Nepal.. good thing, I already cut my hair.. lol
clever.. funny.. creative.. ha! you know the rest..
well done, my good friend..
Thanks for the crack..
on Aug 20 2015 04:15 AM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - LOL, nice one bro...never took you for the Narcissus clone...
for the read...
on Aug 20 2015 05:53 AM PST x edit
Inkognito - lol
always a pleasure, and you're very welcome, boss Iff..
on Aug 20 2015 05:56 AM PST x edit
Rhymedraven - you are the master of humor my friend lol .. loved it as always you never disappoint
on Aug 19 2015 07:20 PM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - Thanks pal...
on Aug 19 2015 07:46 PM PST x edit
Rhymedraven - It is my pleasure to pluck my feather and give it to you for your own leisure
on Aug 19 2015 07:54 PM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - LOL!
on Aug 19 2015 09:25 PM PST x edit
D.Ann - Liked it
Cute! Now that is one vain glorious dude!!! Well done
on Aug 19 2015 04:21 PM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - LOL..thank you sweet Dee!!
on Aug 19 2015 04:25 PM PST x edit
Deborahlee - lol. you are good at these!!!
me... not so much lmao
on Aug 19 2015 03:37 PM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - We need a Gress entrance, lol, maybe you should give him the heads up Deb...haven't heard much from him lately...
on Aug 19 2015 03:41 PM PST x edit
Deborahlee - I know... I miss him. I sent him a pm yesterday or the day before but have heard nothing
on Aug 19 2015 03:41 PM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - Must be busy if he's not said boo to you...hope all is well...
on Aug 19 2015 03:42 PM PST x edit
Deborahlee - I am hoping to hear from him tonight sometime... I believe he works Wednesday nights.
I am a bit worried myself...
on Aug 19 2015 03:46 PM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - I fully expect him back soon...ttyl...
on Aug 19 2015 03:59 PM PST x edit
Deborahlee - take care my friend xo
on Aug 19 2015 03:59 PM PST x edit
Goldistring - hahah oh mannn loved it, hell yeah - he was having a ball.!!
on Aug 19 2015 02:58 PM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - Hahaha, thanks G..this Dod guy likes limericks...I may have to bust out a few oldies for him...LOL..
on Aug 19 2015 03:35 PM PST x edit
Sweet Pea 23.x - Haha... I always knew I could get a chuckle from a visit to your page brilliant humour in a clever and catchy Limerick
xx
on Aug 19 2015 01:57 PM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - Thanks sweetie...did I tell you you're getting a bit old for me? Hahaha, jk..someday I will have to tell you my ultimate blond joke...
on Aug 19 2015 02:08 PM PST x edit
Sweet Pea 23.x - yep I am over the hill now or at least thats what about 10 of my birthday cards told me hehe.... it is always a pleasure reading your work my lovely and I will look forward to your ultimate blond joke I have a friend or two I could use it on
xxx
on Aug 19 2015 02:11 PM PST x edit
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Iff Ur Abs - You got it...I'll start you out with an old one...Why did the blonde get fired from the M&M factory?? Ans: She kept throwing out the "W's"...
on Aug 19 2015 02:35 PM PST x edit
Sweet Pea 23.x - Haha... omdz thats fantastic I will defo be borrowing that one I will be curious to know how long it takes them to work it out
xxx
on Aug 19 2015 03:07 PM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - I got plenty more.. Okay, here's another...How do you drown a blonde? Ans: Glue a mirror on the bottom of your pool...hahaha...
on Aug 19 2015 03:27 PM PST x edit
Sweet Pea 23.x - Haha... that one is brilliant I shall be borrowing that one for sure you could get me into trouble you know with these xx xx
on Aug 20 2015 07:51 AM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - Well we wouldn't want that...I'd better stop...
on Aug 20 2015 08:09 AM PST x edit
Sweet Pea 23.x - Either that or travel down and be my backup
xx
on Aug 20 2015 08:13 AM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - Hahaha...that sounds like fun...
Well if you get in trouble hit em with a
until I arrive
Btw, I kind of like the new moniker...
on Aug 20 2015 08:23 AM PST x edit
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Sweet Pea 23.x - Yay thank you my lovely I fancied a change but you know me I give it a week until I am back to Louise lol big ss
xx
on Aug 20 2015 08:35 AM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - Some summer snow does sound refreshing in August..maybe the name changes should be seasonal... Anytime, my lovely...change away, a fine woman's prerogative...
on Aug 20 2015 08:51 AM PST x edit
Desperate Donut - hehehehehe
Enjoyed it - Oi!
High five!
on Aug 19 2015 01:28 PM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - Thanks as always DG...since I wasn't sure if my limerick was male or female, I wrote about a male (in love with himself!) hahaha...
on Aug 19 2015 02:04 PM PST x edit
Jan G. - Enigmatic. But I've always thought if one has to fall it's always better to do it with style.
on Aug 19 2015 10:36 AM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - Hahaha, true enough Jan...go big or stay at home is my motto! Thanks for the thoughts...
on Aug 19 2015 12:43 PM PST x edit
Susan VDP - lol - a witty limerick :-)
on Aug 19 2015 10:35 AM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - Glad you liked it Susan! ♥♥♥
on Aug 19 2015 01:19 PM PST x edit
- As he flew through the air, He combed his blond hair... i never have met any man quite this vain but i have met enough self-involved handsome teens that i would love to send to nepal - heehee! next time i encounter one, i shall picture the mountain!
on Aug 19 2015 10:12 AM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - Hahaha...you're funny kid.... Thanks for the comment hon...
on Aug 19 2015 01:26 PM PST x edit
Mariv - Great
Title / intro is: He was so vain even to the end Abs! It was very meaningful !
on Aug 19 2015 10:08 AM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - Hahaha, thanks so much sweetie...I love your comments...
on Aug 19 2015 01:20 PM PST x edit
Mariv - Thanks Abs! and your style of writing is great, you have a variety of everything! which makes it more interesting!
on Aug 19 2015 02:41 PM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - Aw...
on Aug 19 2015 02:50 PM PST x edit
Mariv -
on Aug 19 2015 03:16 PM PST x edit
Maureen Higson -
What a way to go..Aaaaarh. Such a tidy corpse. Maureen.
on Aug 19 2015 08:02 AM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - Yes indeed...splendid! *thanks Maureen...
on Aug 19 2015 08:04 AM PST x edit
Jim baruffi - but where are the curse words? must be a dapper dan man, goddamnit
on Aug 19 2015 07:00 AM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - Hahaha...kept this one clean my brother...have some lusty ones on tap, lol....
on Aug 19 2015 07:02 AM PST x edit
Abhilaaj - Lovely.
Title / intro is: good
Something to work on is: mil
Was good fun. Nice.
on Aug 19 2015 06:55 AM PST x edit
Iff Ur Abs - Thanks for the nice review friend...
on Aug 19 2015 06:59 AM PST x edit